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In a security room, [[Major General]] [[George S. Hammond]] and [[Brigadier General]] [[Michael Kerrigan]] discuss the supposed foothold situation which is actuality a training exercise.
 
In a security room, [[Major General]] [[George S. Hammond]] and [[Brigadier General]] [[Michael Kerrigan]] discuss the supposed foothold situation which is actuality a training exercise.
   
The recruits then launch their attack on Daniel and Teal'c and rig the supposedly mind-controlling device with [[C-4]]. When it doesn't explode (it was clay, not C-4), SG-1 reveals that the whole thing was a very elaborate ploy set up by SG-1, Hammond, and the SGC personnel; the "real" bullets were in fact blank ones. They congratulate the lieutenants.
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The recruits then launch their attack on Daniel and Teal'c and rig the supposedly mind-controlling device with [[C-4]]. When it doesn't explode (it was clay, not C-4), SG-1 and reveal that the whole thing was a very elaborate ploy set up by SG-1, Hammond, and the SGC personnel; the "real" bullets were in fact blank ones. They congratulate the lieutenants.
   
 
Hailey, however, is still in the Embarkation Room, trying to finish her part of the mission. Suddenly, the Stargate engages and opens a wormhole that turns out to be releasing deadly [[radiation]]. Hailey tries to manually override the [[Iris]], but is electrocuted in the process and passes out. Elliot, ignores Hammond's orders to evacuate and runs into the room anyway to attempt to rescue his fallen teammate.
 
Hailey, however, is still in the Embarkation Room, trying to finish her part of the mission. Suddenly, the Stargate engages and opens a wormhole that turns out to be releasing deadly [[radiation]]. Hailey tries to manually override the [[Iris]], but is electrocuted in the process and passes out. Elliot, ignores Hammond's orders to evacuate and runs into the room anyway to attempt to rescue his fallen teammate.
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