Talk:Stromos

Overview
In case you guys didn't notice, the Overview section needs some extreem revising. I mean, the entire paragraph makes no sense at all.

Stromos is a robust design, with four long, cylindrical chamber at its rear, which contained the cryogenic sleep chambers. Stromos was equipped with defensive technologies can bring life forms unconscious for an indefinite period. And the ship was fully automated after the ship left the scope of Talthun sun's solar flare, on his way to Talthuns new homeworld Ardena.

This needs some extreem revision (especialy underlined parts).